Two months after being bitten by the spider Peterfaces his frist real threat Alistair Smythe (who blames spiderman for his father's suicide) and his mechanical spider slayers.This project is founded by jameson who also gives Smythe a subject to create the Ultimate Slayer unstable criminal Mac Gargan.At the same time Peter tries helping his poor aunt. THERE IS MUCH MORE BUT THIS IS ALL I COULD QUICKLY WRITE
A few changes, I think we are goign to try and set up SHIELD as the main villain of the Avengers movie, so maybe the movie can go like this:
Two months after being bitten by the spider, Peter Parker begins to be hunted down by the advanced robots, Spider Slayers. Unaware of who is hunting him, Peter unravels the mystery of who is trying to capture him. As he gets close, the mysterious group unleash the Scorpion, to distract Peter. Facing off against someone with more skill than him, Peter will have to think creatively to defeat him. As Peter defeatsthe scorpion, he demands to know who is hunting him, and Mac tells him that SHIELD is hunting him, and to go into exile before they find out who he is. Not willing to give up on saving people, Spiderman infiltrates SHIELD's headquaters (posing as The Daily Bugle) and faces off against the scorpion's creator, JJJ. He finishes by destroying SHIELD's survelance HQ, and disapears into the night as a vigilante again.
Going into the Avengers, SHIELD are going to be collecting superhumans and are the villains of the film. In their bid for power, they will summon a great evil that requires Doctor Strange to unite the Avengers, includiong Spider-Man.
I don't know about shield being behind the slayers maybe in the post credit scene it's reaveled that they helped fund it or they free Smythe so he can work for them.Also SHIELD could be behind Jamesin's sons disappearance as ge was captured by sheld's alien allies. Also maybe a little known fella named Norman Osborn could be behind some of shield's superhumans
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He'll be set up like how he is in the first movie, with the performance-enhancers. His story, though, will be played out more like it is in the comics, with the whole amnesia subplot occuring in the middle of the third season. I'll eventually adapt Amazing #121-122 towards the Season 3 finale.
It's supposed to play off the movies. Also, in Sensational, Goblin really only did kill off one Board member. He had a hit list of the others that he never got to, as it was supposed to play off of TAS. The only other Oscorp employee he killed was Mendell Stromm, who wasn't even on the Board.
Because I wanted to do something a little more... original. The rewrite stemmed from a saga a wrote out for A Puff of Responsibility. I just took that saga (because it was comprised of my own original ideas for the mythos.) and removed the Powerpuff Girls element from it.
If you like the original idea for Irresponsible so much, go ahead and use it for one of your series'.
Well it sounds cool but how will the avengers fight against that many kaijus and how is it more insane than secret wars (that thing had a giant purple force of the universe a near omnipotent former fantastic four villain , an alien costume and an ultipotent disco man )?
As far as my knowledge extends to, there have been 2 other Spidey/PPG crossover stories on the site. One is based on the Powerpuff Girls anime, but is currently on hiatus. The other was based on the original show, but it was taken down a few months after I posted A Puff of Responsibility.
Yeah, the Insidious Eight is kinda cheesy. The original creator of the article put that there long before I arrived on the site. It was one thing on TAS because of the censorship restrictions, but it doesn't really fit in Spectacular.
As far as what I need help with, writing the last couple of episodes, mainly both parts of Breeding Grounds.
first i recommend that you give spectacular 13 episodes per season , for breeding grounds i recommend that for part 2 you instead call it something else like hatchilings .Another thing take kraven , the enforcers and kangaroo out of part 1
Great for the first arc i thought that maybe peter is placed in Victorian Englad (which is where mj ended up) and tries taking her to the future at the same time he fights against time displaced carnage and Green Goblin with the help from venom .
The way I heard it, according to people who like to tie TAS with Unlimited, Peter tells Mary Jane his secret identity and explains everything that had happened since her "return" during Spider-Man's fight with Green Goblin II. They simply remain together, as they are already married legally, as if nothing had happened during the whole clone debacle. It would probably be best if we did that.
Another thing, can we keep this in the actual continuity of the show instead of placing it in it's own timeline for once?
I don't want to follow into Unlimited, though, as that would fuel the misconception that TAS and Unlimited are canon with one another, which they aren't.
As for villains, I was thinking about new villains to possibly use. Rose is a definite possibility, but I was also thinking about seeing Miles Warren actually don the costume and persona of the Jackal so that the actual Clone Saga happens. The one villain I want to put in though, as I was so confused watching TAS as a kid, is the Sandman.
Ok i also would introduce comic book electro as we only got nazi one and i would love if we had a demogoblin/ghost rider/dormamu plot.How do you want to introduce sandman as a wild pack member or as a criminal?
A criminal would be nice. A possible story I had was that Flint Marko was a career criminal on the run from Sable and the Wild Pack, who are hunting him for a bounty. Spider-Man soon gets caught up in the middle of the mess and discovers very quickly Marko's powers. However, Marko has a sympathetic side and regrets what he does, and that he's only doing this because of his ailing daughter.
Thanks, also maybe we could intentionally re use animation (which we will try to recreate from the first season) and never have spidey punch antone in Radioactive as an in joke to the original show , what do you think?
Also, next time, if I'm talking to X about adopting abandoned pages for our purposes, let me talk to him. It gets kind of overbearing when you come along and try to tell him stuff we need RIGHT when I'm doing the same thing.
...Make it less like Spectacular? Dude, I'm sorry, but the entire thing is pretty much a mirror of Spectacular no matter which way you look at it.
Try to make it less like what everyone else does, like what I did for Sensational (made it like the mainstream comics from the 60's to the 90's.) and Irresponsible (my own take on the classic mythos.).
...Change Spidey's design? I dunno. Spectacular's design is... I'm gonna be honest, kind of overrated. I mean, it's cool and all, don't get me wrong, but the fact that EVERYONE tries to emulate EVERYTHING about Spectacular is getting old at this point.
Try to do something different with the design. Make the design based on the artwork of an underrated artist, such as Pat Olliffe.
I think that it's... decent. Saying that it's the best thing ever seen in literature would be a lie, but saying that it's the death of writing would... also be a lie. There are things I do like about it, but there are things I don't at the same time.
If I could offer some constructive criticism; 1. You asked me once if I thought that the series should have 13 episodes per season (at the time it had 26), to which I replied yes. A fan-made web series doesn't need to have that many episodes in it's season. Even most television shows don't have that many episodes in each season. Most super hero shows, like Daredevil, only have about 20 episodes at most. If there's one thing that you should take away from Spectacular is the episode count. 13 episodes is perfect in my opinion.
2. Even though you changed a lot of things with this new rewrite... the thing still mirrors Spectacular in many ways. As I've said before, and I'm gonna be honest, basing EVERYTHING off of Ultimate/Spectacular/the movies is getting, well... REALLY, REALLY OLD. Those interpretations of the character and the overall universe are realistic, sure, but that seems to be the trend with almost all things super hero ("cough"cough"Christopher Nolan"cough"cough") and it's as stale as Chewbacca's dried up shit-shards on his ass hair. If anything, you should try and move away from the style and look of Spectacular and try to emulate something else. You claim that you want to build up the supporting cast like Spectacular, here's a better piece of media that builds up the characters even BETTER than Spectacular; SPIDER-MAN LOVES MARY JANE.
3. The scripts are jarring, I'm gonna be honest. I appreciate liberties being taken when it comes to this site and it's pages, but the scripts are AWFUL. Not the scripts themselves, those are fine, top notch writing. But what's awful about them is the fact that they really take away from the person reading the article and then coming to the scripts, which are just jarring to say the least. I know you said once that you normally would forget about the script if you put into, say, a Word document, but here's an even better idea; POST THE SCRIPTS ON FANFICTION.NET. That place is the PERFECT place for those scripts to be. They're appropriate in terms of the layout and design, and you can post unfinished documents onto the site and then go back and update them later.
Bottom line, I don't mean to sound like an arrogant asshole nitpicking every single thing you've done, but I think that now's the time where someone comes in and tells you what you COULD, not SHOULD, COULD fix on your property, and what can be done better. I'm telling you this for not just your sake, but for the sake and integrity of the site.
I don't know about taking influence about using Spider-Man loves Mary Jane as inspiration as the comic does not develop any of the villains and while i like that version of the characters they are just not what i'm looking for.
I might go with either vulture telepathically controlling his wings and throwing razor-sharp artificial feathers at his targets. Also maybe he could carry a gun like the tas counterpart or have electric talons or grenades (goblin bombs prototypes) . Another thing i might have vulture set up devices after the first fight with spider-man to have an advantage.Opinions , buddy?
Hey Max apparently the new Spider-Man cartoon is also gonna have Anaya Corazon besides the other spiders , this is getting too similar to ultimate for a supposed "back to basics" show .What do you think?
I mean, it would be one thing if it was only Anya and Peter, because that would at least make since considering their status as mainstream characters. But nooo! "Gotta throw in Miles and Gwen for the sake of marketing!"
And you know what's worse : instead of doing classic spider stories they are going to do Fan Slott's stories which will most likely be forgetten in a couple of years such as Superior Spider-Man and Spider-Spider-Island.Also on a neutral point the design for the villains is great.
IMO, it sounds too techo-y for the more down-to-Earth and grounded approach (like with The Spectacular Spider-Man) you seem to be taking with your series. It also strangely reminds me of the 1960s Spider-Man animated series.
I dunno, it's your series. Do with it what you will, but I'd recommend changing it to something that doesn't sound like something out of a poorly rendered video game. The two best themes I can recommend are, as said before, the theme from TNAS and the theme from Spider-Man Unlimited, probably TNAS theme more because it fits the more realistic universe you're writing this series in.
There was some concept art released before the movie was cancelled showing what John Malkovich's Vutlure might have looked like. I really liked the design and decided to base my minifigure's look off of it. Complete with a beard.
I want to know your opinion about a couple of things such as your opinions in the spider man the animated series comic book tie in, the spider-man movie which you didn't liked and most hated spider-man trends
The first one (the one my mom ordered) is the standard version. It comes with alternate hands and different webline accessories.
The second version (the DX version) comes with all of the aforementioned accessories, but a few extras, such as a swappable Peter Parker head, a cell phone, and a backpack. The paint job on this version is also slightly darker to emulate the Times Square battle and the Final Battle.
No, no. I've been nice enough, but I'm honsestly sick of his behaviour. I'm not saying be an asshole to him, but lets not treat this matter like it's sunshine and roses. We need to be up front and honest about it. Let's tell him in about 45 minutes. You'll be the one to tell him, and I'll explain why.
No. The only kaiju that have anthros in the Kaijuverse are Godzilla (Tim/Spidey II), SpaceGodzilla (Xenilla), Biollante (Erika/Biollante), King Ghidorah (Maximus Yeager/Goblin Master), and MechaGodzilla (Spider-Slayer Mk X0).
As for villains, you could probably do Doctor Octopus. In this story, Doc Ock is the illegitimate son of Otto Octavius and Carolyn Trainer, the first and second Ocks. He hates Spider-Man to a high degree for destroying his father and ruining his legacy and seeks revenge.
Because I'm reformatting it and Blind Justice to fit here. There's a lot of plot points that I had to take out because they weren't relevant anymore. I also want to write out ideas I have for other web series'. Basically, I'm bringing the LEGO Marvel Extended Universe back, just with a new direction and tone.
Let's see what works. One such concept I had was to have an amalgamation of various Spider-Man TV series' intros. Another was to feature the Spider-Man 90s theme from the Spider-Man: The Animated Series OST, as seen here.
For the intro i suggest that we start withvthw traditional spider man theme but the camera then starts changing to different universes (shown as strands in a web) and the musoc changes in each one example Thim has the 90's ost while my version has the ps1 version